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Heart Hunter Prequel (Preview)

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Ok, I’m NOT A VERY GOOD WRITER BUT I’ll give this a try. It’s a story I’ve been planning for a while and though most of it is still being planed I decided to write these Ideas that flood my brain and keep me from sleeping at night. :D


Heart Hunter (Prequel)


A shadowy image was crouching in the distance, observing his victim. He was quiet, observant, he tensed his muscles and when the time was right he charged at his target.
“Oof” was all his victim said before he was pinned to the ground harshly. The Hunter, satisfied with his accomplishment grinned and said
“Hah! Got you again dad!”
The pinned mouse shook his child from his back as he gave an annoyed groan
“Felix, son, is this really a good time to be bothering me? Do you even know in what position the sun is in!?”
Felix looked around trying to find the right words to say
“Uh… No… I just thought maybe we could have some fun together”
He smiled at his father who flicked his tail at the comment. He sighed and turned away from his son
“I-I’m really busy today, you know, I’ve got a clan to feed. Go on, bother someone else”
Felix hesitated but at the end he left, he tried to make his father’s behavior not affect his personality. He shook his head and jumped happily towards the other rats who were still in a deep sleep.
Oh the fun he would have with these clueless suckers!
Should I continue this?

I didn't mean to name Anon Felix. xD But at the en I thought it would be pretty ironic for oh, you know, something I plan in the future. *Grins like a creep*

So yeah, tell me what you think and if I should or should not continue to write stuff like this. For all my series. All of them. (Cause by the time I upload them to youtube I'll be D E A D !)
Hahaha... No not really. You get my point. They're still going, but I'm SO SLOW! Not to mention lazy.
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